Dear Marti, so nice to find you in here, thank you for telling me you enjoyed my thoughts. Right now I was out watching dark clouds gathering and listening to the growling of thunder. That too is fascinating!
Dear Roniece, thank you so much for seeing grace in my words. I imagine in Australia you have a vast view of horizon and can enjoy the immense cloud spectacles endlessly. (having the time!)
Dear Sue, thank you from my heart for your loving comment. I enjoy your visits very much.
Dear Hazard, thank you for taking the time to ponder over my haiku. I must say I love your version of the third line but yes the syllables are too many, as it has a pattern of 5-7-5 syllables.
"oerdrawn by the twilight's palimpsest" beautiful!
Shellie dear girly, thank you for coming back to dance with the clouds.
Love to all,