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Clouds (3 haiku)

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HAZARD
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25 posted 06-28-2009 09:51 AM       View Profile for HAZARD   Email HAZARD   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HAZARD

Blue skies use white clouds
like painters use canvases:

I very much like this couplet.  -
Not sure of  the 'beauty' line...

'Oerdrawn by twilight's palimpsest'

Is my rash stab - it probably messes with the syllables though!

HAZARD
brneyedgrly
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26 posted 06-28-2009 07:07 PM       View Profile for brneyedgrly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brneyedgrly


~just coming back to cloud~watch and savor these images...beautiful

: )
Margherita
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27 posted 06-30-2009 02:12 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Dear Marti, so nice to find you in here, thank you for telling me you enjoyed my thoughts. Right now I was out watching dark clouds gathering and listening to the growling of thunder. That too is fascinating!

Dear Roniece, thank you so much for seeing grace in my words. I imagine in Australia  you have a vast view of horizon and can enjoy the immense cloud spectacles endlessly. (having the time!)

Dear Sue, thank you from my heart for your loving comment. I enjoy your visits very much.

Dear Hazard, thank you for taking the time to ponder over my haiku. I must say I love your version of the third line but yes the syllables are too many, as it has a pattern of 5-7-5 syllables.
"oerdrawn by the twilight's palimpsest" beautiful!

Shellie dear girly, thank you for coming back to dance with the clouds.

Love to all,
Margherita
Nancy Hardin
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28 posted 12-09-2009 05:59 PM       View Profile for Nancy Hardin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nancy Hardin's Home Page   View IP for Nancy Hardin

What a wonderful word picture in this haiku. I will be reading all in the days to come.
Margherita
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29 posted 12-10-2009 05:06 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Thank you, dear Nancy, for sharing in the dance of clouds. Enjoyed your loving comment!

Love,
Margherita
2islander2
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30 posted 12-10-2009 01:10 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

clouds deserve your talent, dear Margherita, thanks

yann
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31 posted 12-22-2009 04:40 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Margherita,

I love your clouds.  You painted them so beautifully.

Merry Christmas.

Love,
Alison
Margherita
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32 posted 12-23-2009 05:53 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Thank you, dear Yann and dear Alison!

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to both.

Love,
Margherita
JamesMichael
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33 posted 12-23-2009 06:11 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Well done Margherita...James
Bill Charles
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34 posted 12-23-2009 10:54 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Margherita - as always my dear one... Molta bene...

BC
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35 posted 12-24-2009 12:35 AM       View Profile for Father   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Father

Margherita;
It is with sincere honesty that I say...
I only wish I could write like that.
Exceptional Haiku.
secondhanddreampoet
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36 posted 12-28-2009 09:32 PM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

FINE 'haiku' !

MUCH applause for this 'penning' !!
The Lady
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37 posted 12-29-2009 12:41 AM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady


lovely Margherita
simply lovely
Zeigeist
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38 posted 12-29-2009 04:44 AM       View Profile for Zeigeist   Email Zeigeist   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zeigeist

very nice
jwesley
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39 posted 12-29-2009 08:47 AM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

ahh...much enjoyed these my friend...

j.
poddarku
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40 posted 12-29-2009 10:21 AM       View Profile for poddarku   Email poddarku   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poddarku

Blessings float on these clouds.

clever talks delay friendship!

Elizabeth Santos
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41 posted 12-30-2009 09:24 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Haiku - to me the most difficult of all forms of poetry. I cannot do it
And yet you write so efforlessly three in a row. and they're perfect
Your work is commendab;e
IT'S FAMTASTIC!
Liz
Margherita
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42 posted 01-20-2010 12:48 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Thank you from my heart, dear Poet friends, just discovered now all these further wonderfully warm replies. Have been away and now still I am recovering from a tough flu, but hope to be back on Pip with my usual energy quickly.

Love,
Margherita
Earl Brinkman
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43 posted 07-31-2010 04:12 AM       View Profile for Earl Brinkman   Email Earl Brinkman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Brinkman

Writing one haiku is a challenge but three?  This is an accomplishment.
 
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