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Elemental Warrior
Junior Member
since 2009-05-27
Posts 20
North Carolina

0 posted 2009-06-23 11:50 AM


Fluttering goes the leaf
Suspended in flight
Wind has captured it
On this particular night

High up it goes
to where nobody knows
sweeping low it teases
crying out in breezes

Forever more it keeps fleeting
innocent of its own needing

peace flows into our lives

© Copyright 2009 Keith - All Rights Reserved
viking_metal
Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.
1 posted 2009-06-23 12:10 PM


I saw this leaf.

Nice work.


P

Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth,
They were breaking each and every time I tried to speak.

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2009-06-23 05:53 PM


This leaf inspired you beautifully.

Love,
Margherita

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2009-06-23 06:48 PM


I imagine myself floating upon this leaf,
to destinations unknown~

~ARH

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