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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. A sky bird At dusk Gliding with Outstretched wings Above the sea Shade Among shadows Reflection on water Face or figure A sound of sighing In the passing breeze You haunt the air In the waking hours Respect no walls Bars or doors Always you offend A stolid man’s solitude As if it were a sin To be alone . |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Haunting realism. |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Very interesting picture painted there. I enjoyed this piece. Arana Darkwolf |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
this whole 'write' is fine ! ... however, I am especially fond of the ending: "You haunt the air In the waking hours Respect no walls Bars or doors Always you offend A stolid man’s solitude As if it were a sin To be alone" sustained applause for this 'penning' !! |
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