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Open Poetry #45

strum of shatterhand

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2009-06-22 10:14 AM

and when I close my eyes with gloves
and press away the fire of her laughter
a strong man's echo with waxen wrists
the gods give me wings of webs then

to catch the smithereens of dreams
from free falling winds of sin
prayerless they are lovely reflections
tinfoiled through microwave salvation

fatherless in my free man's mantle
dropped back from lies, and yeahs passing
when the skits of her skirts entertained
and drew my interest away from loaned life

lest my highways became a lepers jello

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daark (highway series) ratio of miles ridden per blown kiss factor weighted by american vs german motorcycle engineering and wtf logic

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2009-06-22 11:19 AM

Okay, m'deah, I am totally lost without a compass - but I like it here.

A

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

2 posted 2009-06-22 11:31 AM

This wass cool, dark:

to catch the smithereens of dreams
from free falling winds of sin
prayerless they are lovely reflections
tinfoiled through microwave salvation

You are supreme when it comes to the wordplay.

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

3 posted 2009-06-22 12:36 PM

when the skits of her skirts entertained
and drew my interest away from loaned life

~love it : )

daark (highway series) ratio of miles ridden per blown kiss factor weighted by american vs german motorcycle engineering and wtf logic

~hilarious! : )

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

4 posted 2009-06-22 01:33 PM

oh snap

is this a word problem? lol

I like the way you figger numbers mister.

Enjoying this series,
H

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2009-06-22 02:09 PM

ms ali-san, thanks little one..

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cg friend, thank you for the lookaround

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ms browneyes, thanks for the girlgrin

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ms UBP, love that snap sound.. thanks lady

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