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Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16
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0 posted 2009-06-22 12:13 PM





Her small steps taken, hearts touching,
spring waters running- great mountains, shedding winter's dreams. A freshness, a beginning, a thaw of winter.

the wind blows her hair
in dark eyes and clever smile
secrets just for me.

Yoin

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-06-22 05:14 AM


Very beautiful, dear Timothy!

Enjoyed this much.

Love,
Margherita

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Gaia
2 posted 2009-06-22 04:19 PM


Nice imagery!
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