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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
You are like smoking Addictive and bad for me You are choking But relaxing me You are making And then breaking me You are awakening But subduing me You are satisfying And then teasing me You are helping But hurting me You are like smoking Addictive and bad for me Arana Darkwolf |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You know I wouldn't have thought about relating a relationship to this, and you just nailed this! Great poem. Carpe' Diem, |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Thank you. Sometimes it's hard to let go of a friend that you love so, but to realize that keeping them is hurting you makes one feel wise. Arana Darkwolf |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Great write. I stopped smoking 4 weeks ago and I have given a lot of thought to the addiction and craving for that which is harmful. Yep, it's tough to end some harmful relationships, Others, not even a tough call if they don't feed your particular addiction. Thanks for penning this, naturally it caught my attention. Shenachie |
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HAZARD Junior Member
since 2009-06-24
Posts 40ENGLAND |
Hi - Am new to these forums. Humane addictions - poetry is one - offer insight yet food faux spiritual leap from some. But here I read a concise reckoning. Caught in the net of an addictive personality, it relaxes me that others have similar tales to tell. Nice - HAZARD |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Said very well! ~ I really like this  MysteriousARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
makes me want to fire up a cohiba and watch the leather tighten..enjoyed it |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
This is awesome! I've always said, "If it tastes good, feels good....it is good." |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Thank you all for your compliments. Although this poem came from a place of pain, I am glad it was enjoyed. Expression always makes my stress relax itself. Arana Darkwolf |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Hey Rachael girl, This is a good one. I feel the pain in it, but you expressed it well. Z |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Thanks, Z. Loves and hugs. I think of you often, chicky. Arana Darkwolf |
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