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Gunslinger
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 901
TX, USA

0 posted 2009-06-20 05:47 PM



There is something 'bout a rifle ball-
Whistling past your ear-
Which turns the blood to water,
And makes you cringe in fear.

They're but a coward's weapon,
A pox that they've been made-
Take me back to days of yore...
When men lived by the blade.

When all that stood twixt men and doom
Was steel, as cold as death-
And blood, and guts...and gritted teeth-
And shouts and labored breath-

The clash of arms, the battle cries-
The kiss of razor blade-
To speed one on the path to hell-
Where warriors beds are made.

Far closer than a favored tart
The blade hung at his side-
And dearer far, to warriors heart
Than brother, or his bride.

When sword and shield did rule the field
And warriors did not quail-
But fought and died, sword by their side-
Thus goes the Traveler's Tale.



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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2009-06-20 06:01 PM


These traveler's Tales almost seem like memories from another lifetime. I wrote something similar once that just kind of came out of nowhere.
                               Ida

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
2 posted 2009-06-20 06:16 PM


Yo Gunslinger,

Your "traveler" has the right idea.  I'd never go anywhere without my pocket knife.

Bobby

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2009-06-20 07:01 PM


Another wonderfully written tale.

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