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viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2009-06-20 12:54 PM


It might be worth the drive
or flight
for a weekend full of amazing.
What do they say? Yes...
Age is only a number.
We could take a trip to somewhere
where we wouldn't be important.
Where age wouldn't be important.

I could show you how
to build a fire, a tent,
in the real northwoods.
We could listen to the wolves at night
and the grouse drum in the morning.
The trees are greener there.
Greener than anywhere else.
_____________________________________
The S Word.



Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth,
They were breaking each and every time I tried to speak.

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brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08
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nowhere and everywhere
1 posted 2009-06-20 01:01 AM


~see, paulie... i told you it was a poem in itself

~kisses~  wow...

viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.
2 posted 2009-06-20 01:10 AM


I'd never have known if you hadn't told me.

Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth,
They were breaking each and every time I tried to speak.

SEA
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with you
3 posted 2009-06-20 02:17 AM


you must have girls lined up around the block
Heart2Heart
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since 2009-05-15
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Scotland/Norway
4 posted 2009-06-20 03:00 AM


Now I don't know about girls around each corner, but I have heard the grouse drum in the morning.  This is quite the wonderful write, a journey for any age I would think.
A poem which stands out.
Heart2Heart

viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.
5 posted 2009-06-20 09:59 AM


SEA... Not true. Every couple months I meet one that looks promising, but there's always something amiss, and we don't date. :P


Heart... It is a wonderful thing. Thank you.
-P

Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth,
They were breaking each and every time I tried to speak.

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