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Tiny Angel

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saved_by_grace
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In the arms of God...


0 posted 06-19-2009 07:27 PM       View Profile for saved_by_grace   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for saved_by_grace

TINY ANGEL


What is it that you dream about
when you're fast asleep?
Dear angel that has graced our hearts
so whole and so complete.

We see you smile with eyes shut tight
and wonder what you see.
Is that where Jesus plays with you
and sets you on His knee?

Or could it be our loved ones that
have passed from here to there?
That lights your soul within your dreams
and bring your smiles, so fair.

You haven't lived here very long,
but what a difference you have made!
You've made us smile with joyous tears
and they're moments we wouldn't trade.

I know we'll see more happy tears
because you are quite small.
The tiny angel God has sent
to mesmerize us all!


Okay, gang, it has been QUITE A WHILE since I've written anything ... even this one is old.  :-/   [Since my niece is now almost four and I wrote this when she was THREE DAYS OLD.  LOL]  I know I may need some critiquing.  Have any for me?  Change up some punctuation?  Different words?  Anything?  : )  


~*~Becka~*~

[This message has been edited by saved_by_grace (06-20-2009 07:15 AM).]

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Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 06-19-2009 08:59 PM       View Profile for Robert E. Jordan   Email Robert E. Jordan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Robert E. Jordan

Yo dear saved_by_grace,

You have the right idea here.  I bet she still smiles.

I'd think of making that "lights" instead of "light".

Love Bobby
saved_by_grace
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2 posted 06-21-2009 01:50 PM       View Profile for saved_by_grace   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for saved_by_grace

Thank you, Bobby, for the kind reply and the "fix".  : )  It's MUCH appreciated!!!

Have a splendid day!!  : D

~*~ Becka ~*~
Ceinwyn
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3 posted 08-17-2009 09:29 PM       View Profile for Ceinwyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ceinwyn

This needs to light up more people's lives.  This is so breathtakingly beautiful and sad.

The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone.

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4 posted 09-27-2011 12:51 PM       View Profile for saved_by_grace   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for saved_by_grace

Awww...THANK YOU, Ceinwyn.  That was very kind! : )
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