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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-06-19 07:50 AM


one of those before you come over afternoons
wearing my holy jeans and flip-flops
of course without socks on
drinking jack and holding a chromed 16
watching gran torino in slow mo again

wish old clint would have done the nam
we might still have won something
other then those chicken foot medals
and there wasn't even any oil there
guess it must have been democracy after all

I hear your brakes squeak and then your door
the aarp meeting must be over
and you have lipstick on over your smile
when you bring KFYucket in a bucket
and something special from the stogie store

a sun dress without pantyhose pretension
a glock cocked on the coffee table
next to your target patterns from the range
and you are braless down to that tattoo
just enough of the sexy on to make me sin

an hour or so after our after dinner cohiba
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daark (saturday evening ghost..)


[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (06-19-2009 09:19 AM).]

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brneyedgrly
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1 posted 2009-06-19 06:49 PM


wish old clint would have done the nam
we might still have won something

~ love this...


and you are braless down to that tattoo
just enough of the sexy on to make me sin

~and this!  : )

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2009-06-20 06:39 AM


thanks brown eyes...
pretty1
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3 posted 2009-06-20 04:30 PM


You sound somewhat melancholy but I do like the line about the just enough of the sexy on to make you sin.

I really enjoy your poetry!


Margherita
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4 posted 2009-06-20 07:45 PM


quote:
wish old clint would have done the nam
we might still have won something
other then those chicken foot medals
and there wasn't even any oil there
guess it must have been democracy after all



Love your ponderings while watching Gran Torino!

So you have a Saturday evening ghost? Mine visits in the early morning! Saturday has its own rhythm, lazy just enough, but also spare time for love.

This was wonderful, dear D.!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2009-06-21 06:35 AM


pretty 1..sure feels nice when you step in..thanks babe


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ms mar..more of a parallel partner view..but I did enjoy the show and have many of the same views..thanks lady

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6 posted 2009-06-23 01:19 AM


This is smokin'!  Sensual wraps around every line.

A

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2009-06-23 07:34 AM


ms ali-san, thanks babe
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