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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere 
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Have I told you how the thought of you thrills me and that the time between seeing you fills me with anticipation? Have I told you how when you touch me I melt in such a way that other touches I’ve felt hold no comparison? Have I told you how it’s possible to know that being without you or letting you go are not options? Have I told you how you’ve made me believe that for some people ‘Love’ and ‘leave’ have different definitions? Have I been remiss, have I told you how? Just in case not I’m telling you now, for clarification. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
That's a very convincing clarification, dear Shellie. Beautifully rendered feelings. Love, Margherita  |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
A very nice tribute poem to that special someone. Nice. Yoin 9/11 was a inside job. Ask questions, demand answers. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
browneyes...there is a cure for that..I think it is called marriage or something like that..(kewl heart lady) |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Lucky be the man that would receive these words. |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
An incredibly lovely poem written no doubt for a very special person in your heart. Heart2Heart |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~thanks, dear 'rita...i do enjoy your warm replies : ) |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~yoinn...thank you. i'm glad you liked my tribute poem |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~dark...nice to hear from you! actually, this is the prelude to my posted poem "unraveling"...you'll have to check that out to see how it ends : ) ~i love it when you call me "kewl heart lady" |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~dear guy... you'd think, huh? (don't tell dark stranger that it didn't work out) : ) |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~heart...thanks for liking my poem |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Dark... Only I get to call her brown eyes. I likez this one, fair mademoiselle. write, write, write your boat, gently down the stream... Paul. Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth, |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~thanks, paulie... ~omg~ ; ) |
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MinSW Member
since 2009-06-14
Posts 53Sri Lanka |
beautiful..may dat special someone feel the same way too... may a broken heart never be ur's.. love and hope, Min |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Brneyedgrly, This is very well written, and arranged. It's a good romantic poem. I like it loads. Love Bobby |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~dearest min... it's too late about the broken heart... yes, i would love someone to feel this way about me... thanks for reading, talented writer you... : ) |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~yo dear bobby... thanks for complimenting my arrangement...you know i count on your proof~reading and approval... glad you like it... |
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