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I Soak You Up Like Sun
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I Soak You Up Like Sun |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere 
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Breathe o’er me, bring me back to life; I’m gasping for air… Please, feed me, I’m hungry for touch; All this time starving… Love me, love, too much not enough; I soak you up like sun. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are enjoying a moment of bloom, dear Shellie. This is very lovely. The yearning is felt. Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
kewl stuff ms...bet it happens |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Wow. Just, wow. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Was wondering why the temp soared today! sounds like a wonderful time : ) Ct |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~dear 'rita... how i wish this was happening in real-time! actually i wrote this six months ago, so i guess that makes it more of a yearning... yes...a yearning... |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~dark... hope it happens soon : ) |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~dear guy... thanks so much for your kind words [This message has been edited by brneyedgrly (06-20-2009 01:49 AM).] |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~ct... when writing this i was trying to describe deep feelings of need...however... if i read it with a sexy spin, it becomes rather hot! maybe i did heat things up : ) ~sizzle... thanks |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
I think I need a cold shower. This has a depth of emotion that goes beyond it's simple words. Wonderful. -Paul Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Short, sweet, full of emotion... breathe on!  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo brneyedgrly, This is a nice little poem. I tend to gasp for air if people get too close to me, except for my wife. She works. Love Bobby |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~glad it was hot for you, paulie : ) thank you for seeing my depths and thinking them wonderful... ~browneyes |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~sunshine...thanks, i will! |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~yo, bobby... yeah, i found that out about you...anyway, i'm glad you liked my little poem. |
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