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viking_metal
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0 posted 2009-06-17 11:31 PM



You
are an exclamation point.
An excuse
to roll up my sleeves,
and try.

You
are water in my glass.
Crystal clear,
absolutely necessary
for my survival.

You
are wonderful.
A perfect flower,
producing
obscene amounts
of oxygen.
____________________________________
I Do Everything Out of Order, Ellen.


-P

Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth,
They were breaking each and every time I tried to speak.

© Copyright 2009 Paul Weisbrod - All Rights Reserved
brneyedgrly
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1 posted 2009-06-18 07:10 AM


~work hard, quench your thirst, breathe deeply, paulie...you are wonderful, too...thank you
viking_metal
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2 posted 2009-06-18 08:16 AM


Thanks, brown eyes.


-P

Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth,
They were breaking each and every time I tried to speak.

Margherita
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3 posted 2009-06-18 10:09 AM


This is such a lovely declaration of love, dear Paul!

The fresh air, the transparency of this feeling, is perceived.

Inhale deeply and be overwhelmed.

Love,
Margherita  

SEA
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4 posted 2009-06-18 11:07 AM


"You
are water in my glass.
Crystal clear,
absolutely necessary
for my survival."

loved that....

you rock Paul!

Robert E. Jordan
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5 posted 2009-06-18 11:17 AM


Thanks Paul,

Yes, I agree that I'm all of those things.

Bobby

viking_metal
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6 posted 2009-06-18 01:58 PM


Margo... Thank you, ma'am. I'm glad you liked it! It's good to hear that my message was conveyed correctly.

My dear, beautiful SEA... Thank you mademoiselle. And no, YOU rock.

Robbus, my main man... You are, sir. You certainly are.

Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth,
They were breaking each and every time I tried to speak.

brneyedgrly
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7 posted 2009-06-18 02:29 PM


: )
Alison
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8 posted 2009-06-22 02:01 AM


Paul,

I really do love this.  It's like a catch in the throat because the feeling is overwhelming.  Wonderful.  You are wonderful.

Alison

viking_metal
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9 posted 2009-06-22 05:58 AM


Thank you Alahoon.


-P

Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth,
They were breaking each and every time I tried to speak.

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