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Chocolateme
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since 2009-03-12
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0 posted 2009-06-17 05:05 PM



I Do

Before I let go, can I look into your eyes?

Can we share just one more kiss, before we exchange good-byes?

Will you tell me that you love me, as you hold me very close?

And say of all the things in all the world, I'm the one you love the most.

As I search for perfect words to tell you things you already know.

I close my eyes and say a prayer that you never let me go.

Will you hum my favorite love song & rock me gently side to side?

And in my mind's eye we're dancing, you're my groom & I'm your bride.

We'll share this fairytale like moment, that I wished would one day come true.

And we'll stand before God and man & to each other say "I Do."

*A Taste Of Chocolate*

© Copyright 2009 Lavada Owens - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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1 posted 2009-06-17 06:11 PM


oh my, how bittersweet...gentle and waning...wonderful prose...enjoyed.
Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2009-06-17 06:26 PM


Poignantly bittersweet, as Lee suggests.
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2009-06-17 07:06 PM


Enjoyed...James
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