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kaile
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25 posted 11-27-2009 09:19 AM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

hi Kacy, it's so good to read you again! hope life's has been well
Midnitesun
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26 posted 11-27-2009 02:20 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

Kaile! you've been missed greatly. How are you????
It's wonderful to have a visit from you...it's another Thanksgiving treat for me.
Klassy Lassy
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27 posted 11-28-2009 07:20 AM       View Profile for Klassy Lassy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Klassy Lassy

Kacy, I am shivering just thinking about being on the beach right now.  The wind is icy and filled with rain, but I hear the breakers from my house in the wee hours of morning.  They are unbelievably powerful in the winter storms now.  

I adore this poem! You make me think of the gulls in summer as they wheel and dive over the waves.  We have a ruggedly beautiful coastline and you capture the untamed glory of it's breath and power with this one.  I used to watch the regatta in Yaquina Bay when my son was working on a king crabber out of Kodiak that would moor there in summer.  Magical, and so is your writing.  Gorgeous poem!     
Robert E. Jordan
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28 posted 11-30-2009 10:21 PM       View Profile for Robert E. Jordan   Email Robert E. Jordan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Robert E. Jordan

Yo dear Kacy,

This is well done.  I don't know how I missed it when it was new.

Love Bobby
zaaclindsay
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29 posted 12-01-2009 12:49 AM       View Profile for zaaclindsay   Email zaaclindsay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for zaaclindsay

hey there,

been going through a rough patch of waters for some time now and at the end of the road I am finding that release you very eloquently capture.  It was never about foundering on the shore, or being shipwrecked....all I had to do was raise the anchor.

good timing

and a good read

zaac
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30 posted 12-01-2009 01:16 AM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

You totally rock.


Seashells never looked so good.

I secretly wish a girl (any one will do) from Pip would fall in love with me.

Susan Caldwell
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31 posted 12-01-2009 09:14 AM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

Beautiful pictures formed in my mind as I read this..

how you doin' Kacy?

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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32 posted 12-01-2009 01:39 PM       View Profile for Soul snatcher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Soul snatcher

How long can an Eagle stay in a Chicken Coop......

We must break free of the shackles and move forward....

Wonderfully expressed....

Ss
Misty Lilacs
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33 posted 12-02-2009 03:35 AM       View Profile for Misty Lilacs   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Misty Lilacs

This is so magnificent. You have the most amazing way of seeing and saying things so beautifully.

--"Hoist the anchor,
let go the weight of the past.

Capture the wind
as it hits your sails,
trim the jib,

  and fly.

Listen to the music
of a wind song
in the sails.

Navigate the stars

  and be free."

Just makes me want to fly with you.

ooxx  Marti

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34 posted 12-27-2009 04:38 PM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

just 'revisiting' this 'write' ...

continued applause!!
Goldenrose
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35 posted 12-29-2009 08:29 PM       View Profile for Goldenrose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Goldenrose

kacy you portray the wildness so very well, i think it is part of you and it shows to such great effect....

Hope you are well very soon and that you continue to gives us these beautiful wild gems...

Thank you...

Goldenrose.

Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC.

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36 posted 12-29-2009 08:30 PM       View Profile for Goldenrose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Goldenrose

kacy you portray the wildness so very well, i think it is part of you and it shows to such great effect....

Hope you are well very soon and that you continue to gives us these beautiful wild gems...

Thank you...

Goldenrose.

Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC.

gilead
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37 posted 12-31-2009 07:57 PM       View Profile for gilead   Email gilead   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gilead

It is good to return after a long journey, and find oneself among friends upon a familiar shore.
gilead
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38 posted 12-31-2009 08:08 PM       View Profile for gilead   Email gilead   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gilead

. . . just to be a single molecule that makes up the wind that blows the ship homeward.
2islander2
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39 posted 01-01-2010 10:52 AM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

a superb poem with flames of freedom and hope, modern texture and vibrant images, enjoyed a lot my read.

yann
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40 posted 01-19-2010 05:22 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

quote:
Listen to the music
of a wind song
in the sails.

Navigate the stars

  and be free.



Now you know what absolute freedom means. Soar high, dearest Kacy, and brighten the skies with your sunny spirit.

Love,
Margherita
Klassy Lassy
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41 posted 01-19-2010 11:35 PM       View Profile for Klassy Lassy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Klassy Lassy

Just holding your light in the dark, Midnitesun.  May the breakers catch every nuance in a promise and the wind cease it's tempest.  

Miss you and love you!

Karen
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