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gdcod2player
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since 2008-07-26
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0 posted 2009-06-17 01:54 AM



I tried to talk silent to her
2 messages she hasn’t notice me
Its falling apart
My lonely heart has been weathered
My lonely heart has been damaged and is so far gone
That you couldn’t see in your mirror
The road keeps going on from here
Keep the engine turning to get the hell away from my strangeness
To get away from the aftershock and fear
I was hoping you would feel the same
I guess I was hanging onto something that I couldn’t touch

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2009-06-17 07:05 PM


Nice writing...James
ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
2 posted 2009-06-19 01:22 PM


I have a lot of one-sided conversations with myself, helps me organize and reflect. Puts me where I need to be to follow up on my thoughts ......


   Silence is a choice


     Ct

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
3 posted 2009-06-19 08:35 PM


I heard music in this
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