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Open Poetry #45
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hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
0 posted 2009-06-16 07:49 PM

Drum the beat
keep it steady
Don't let it go to far
I'm not sure
your ready

to feel
what might be felt
to see
what you can't unsee

I'm not sure you ready
to be what they
want you to be


JJ

[This message has been edited by hiddensmiles (06-16-2009 08:49 PM).]
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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
1 posted 2009-06-19 01:15 PM

Sometimes "steady" is better than being ready.

    I liked the simple rhythm, sometimes simple is the best way of all!


      I think this needs to find its way back into the light ....

  

    Ct

"You don't have to go
You're the poetry man
You make things all rhyme" - P. Snow


              
hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
2 posted 2009-07-17 02:15 AM

thanks for the comment

JJ
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