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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2009-06-16 05:08 PM


         night passing

As echoes of the dark and
careworn, tremulous night
fade with the immaculately    
   gentle dawn,
be prepared to freely dance,
through the tentative-twilight
   breeze,
to the music of life awakening
in this luminous sunrise forest,
and follow that evanescent
   morning mist
beyond the radiant far-horizon  
   of your dreams.


            --- b. e. adams (6/16/2009)

© Copyright 2009 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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1 posted 2009-06-16 05:16 PM


secondhanddreampoet - don't mind the night's passing and what it may bring, howevre, I just wish the passing would slow down some...

BC

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2009-06-17 06:41 AM


Beautiful thoughts and presentation.
LeeJ
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3 posted 2009-06-17 08:25 AM


oh, how lovely, this took me there...thank you...

Lee J.

Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2009-06-28 04:25 PM


This is really a spectacular write, dear Bruce!

Love,
Margherita

Marchmadness
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5 posted 2009-06-28 06:36 PM


Amazing write, Bruce. This took me back to the forest of my childhood and renewed my dreams.
                                Ida

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2009-06-29 11:04 AM


Night begone!
I'm rising, shining, and dancing!

You write glorious music!

Love & Awakenings!

Linda

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7 posted 2009-06-29 12:47 PM


so uplifting and inspiring!

brought back memories for me ~

~ARH

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In Your Poetic Mind
8 posted 2009-06-29 05:51 PM


love reading you...

~~**~~
I never let one moment define me,
I define myself by all moments and how they teach and touch me......02  

SEA
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with you
9 posted 2009-06-29 08:05 PM


I was going to quote my favorite part, lol
it's all of it! always a joy to read you

secondhanddreampoet
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10 posted 2009-06-30 09:35 PM


MANY thanks to all who have found some small merit in my 'scribblings'  ...

along the way, I hope that I have been at least one 'small voice' for Gaia;
embracing/celebrating diversity; and the 'Universalist' paradigm (both scientific
and philosophic)

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