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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England 
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Random Thoughts Searching wildly: down deep in our thoughts we tread the unknown of our souls tears Searching for the answers we so long desired until the cries of the anguished die over the years Here in the burden of our own self-worth we see what we have become islands of our own making and our long journey has begun Enveloping the time to sit and reflect All the times that we try to respect Leaving the confines of our warm protection And sit upon a moments reflection.. Hearing those words that ring so true Think for a while what they mean to you Do you not think that the words are wise Why can they not see it? before there eyes, Shake them awake, make them hear The ones that will be gone, that they hold so dear Gone is the time when the children listened anew Sad are the times when they all ignore you Annie 16-6-2009 |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
Shake them awake, make them hear The ones that will be gone, that they hold so dear Gone is the time when the children listened anew Sad are the times when they all ignore you ~annie...not sure if this was meant how i took it but this really hit me...thank you |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Thank you The concept is kids don't always listen or hang around when there grown up so you have to try and make then listen while you can And before they go..or in other words it is what ever it means to you I hope this helps  Annie |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~yes, annie...that is exactly how i took it! thanks |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Thank you brneyedgrly for your feedback |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Thank you James  |
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