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Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
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0 posted 2009-06-16 01:24 PM


That you would hold me
Take my hand beside the stream
See within my deepest grieving
Turn it all into another dream

More than friendship will discover
What secrets our eyes have kept
To still the hand that trembles
Joy issues from where once was wept

Voices soft in the sharing
A minute without is far too long
Taste the sweet heat of longing
Given in to a bond that is strong

No harm will come to you in this way
Angel arms will comfort with a smile
A warm breath on lips of love
That was there all the while

That you would hold me
Heal all the torment I describe
Smooth the aching waters
Of the endless ocean inside

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Anniepimm
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1 posted 2009-06-16 05:16 PM


Awwww that's lovely flows really well
I really enjoyed reading this piece

Thank you for sharing it

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with you
2 posted 2009-06-16 05:43 PM


excellent
brneyedgrly
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3 posted 2009-06-16 06:12 PM



~sigh~

this sounds so good to me  : )


"Smooth the aching waters
Of the endless ocean inside"

~love this

unboundpoetess
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4 posted 2009-06-17 01:12 AM


You ache in this plea for healiing, spilling it all over the page.

H

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5 posted 2009-06-17 05:43 AM


if only, how beautiful would that be?

Loved this.

Chalmette Guy
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6 posted 2009-06-17 10:10 AM


Thank you all....I am honored.
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