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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2009-06-16 08:20 AM



He

Prays on the weak, their signs of need
painted in polished words,
trusting  instinct to deliver.

He dedicates variance
to burnishing a night vision
contemplating his tomorrows.

His memories never sleep,
hoping to dance to the strength
of the moon's hue

Obscured only by the darkness
of a heart rich in expression
yet fumbling the catch...

for want of more.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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1 posted 2009-06-16 08:27 AM


oh how beautiful, and as it is with most lives...

well done and good to see you again...

hugs
Lee J.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2009-06-16 08:41 AM


Gosh Lee, it seems like forever since I have seen your name. Hope life has been treating you well.


M

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2009-06-16 09:48 AM


quote:
His memories never sleep,
hoping to dance to the strength
of the moon's hue



How beautifully expressed!

Enjoyed this too, very much. There is a certain confluence with her. They can walk together ...

Love,
Margherita

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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Green Mountains of VT
4 posted 2009-06-16 01:50 PM


I somehow feel I have seen this before ... puzzling, lol.

    Mars and Venus have some sort of attraction and repel to your naked thoughts this morning.   : )

   Ct

Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28
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Oklahoma USA
5 posted 2009-06-16 10:27 PM


As always, you have penned a very beautiful poem, here.
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
6 posted 2009-06-16 11:55 PM


His memories never sleep,
hoping to dance to the strength
of the moon's hue

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lest we forget....Men are from Mars!!  

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2009-06-23 08:16 AM


Thanking you for reading and responding~~

M

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