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A Beautiful Disaster
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0 posted 2009-06-16 05:05 AM


I'm wild and sometimes even heartless-can-be,
I'm fond of collecting illusions to ruin,
I'm breaking the rules life has written for me,
"Create to destroy" best describes what I'm doing.
I'm scarily dangerous, silently loud -
A walking disaster you'd better ignore,
The pain in the neck of a desperate crowd.
But I'm like a magnet - you'll only want more.

You'll figure me out, you'll get to the core -
One beauty, two fears, three dangers - it's me.
You'll enter my heartspace and close the door
For anyone else who I wanted to be.
My truth was denying devotion and faith,
And now you've proved right the opposite true
A chain of mistakes is the sign of my days;
My strength will forgive me - it led me to you.

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brneyedgrly
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1 posted 2009-06-16 06:28 PM


I'm wild and sometimes even heartless-can-be,
I'm fond of collecting illusions to ruin,

              ~~~~~~~

A chain of mistakes is the sign of my days;
My strength will forgive me - it led me to you.


~i'm glad there is someone like me out there...lol

MinSW
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Sri Lanka
2 posted 2009-06-17 10:50 AM


seems to fit what i am exactly..."a magnet" ...very true.. lol
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3 posted 2009-06-22 01:33 AM


I read this immediately after you posted it, but couldn't respond from work.  I fell into it then and fell into it now.  

I like your writing.

A

quote:
I'm wild and sometimes even heartless-can-be,
I'm fond of collecting illusions to ruin,
I'm breaking the rules life has written for me,
"Create to destroy" best describes what I'm doing.
I'm scarily dangerous, silently loud -
A walking disaster you'd better ignore,



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