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freeze us both in time@
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since 2009-06-14
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0 posted 2009-06-16 12:40 PM



she loves you more than ever

so deeply yes she does

lounge around and smothered

you rarely make a fuss

watching spongebob squarepants

her favourite cartoon show

please dont get so mad that she never lets you go

eyes glued to the tv poking fun at those on screen

poking fun at poor old etty as she isnt thin and lean

etty loves you dearly her favourite 'bestest friend'

all her worth is family until the very end
I LOVE YOU! =]

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-06-16 05:48 AM


Though I have never watched the cartoon you mention, I am a big cartoon fan and therefore I can justify her passion ...


I think this is a delightful write, dear "freeze", where you rendered love, compassion, tolerance and reassurance very well.

Love,
Margherita  


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