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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2009-06-15 12:11 PM



Raindrops like prisms,
miniature rainbows sealed
within perfect bubbles.
clouds interchanging shapes,
revealing blinding sun.
Fresh winds crashing
through mind thoughts.
Cushioned verdant turf
my wild bed,
to repose and
free my dreams
of myriad hues.

Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC.

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2009-06-15 01:29 PM


Oh, this is lovely, Phil!
Calming, soothing, relaxing imagery.
It's a real pleasure to read you again.

Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2009-06-15 05:54 PM


I did enjoy this very much, dear Phil. Your eyes behold beauty and render it in a captivating way.

Love,
Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2009-06-15 06:54 PM


grand imagery indeed!

a most pleasant 'read' ...

MUCH (sustained) applause for this 'write' !!

[always a distinct pleasure, Phil ... when you grace
  these fine blue canvases with your 'pennings']

LeeJ
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4 posted 2009-06-16 08:35 AM


beautiful....
beautiful
beautiful

Lee J.

A Romantic Heart
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5 posted 2009-06-16 10:12 AM


Raindrops like prisms,
miniature rainbows sealed....

My favorite line...
~ARH

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
6 posted 2009-06-16 08:16 PM


So pretty how you cast the light in such a wonderful way.

Beautifully done, as always~

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2009-06-16 09:51 PM


Goldenrose - your words in this writing flow with much meaning. Well done...

BC

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8 posted 2009-06-17 01:15 AM


Cushioned verdant turf
my wild bed,
to repose and
free my dreams
of myriad hues

Loved this particular.
Heather

secondhanddreampoet
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9 posted 2009-06-18 08:04 PM


just returning for another 'read' of this fine 'penning' !

I am especially fond of:

"Raindrops like prisms,
miniature rainbows sealed
within perfect bubbles.
clouds interchanging shapes,
revealing blinding sun."

continuing applause !!

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