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freeze us both in time@
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since 2009-06-14
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0 posted 2009-06-15 06:15 AM



Just let me grasp that special feeling
and guarantee a spring divine
rid you off possessions fleeting
Remaining clarity so fine.

Why so broken?

Summer seemed so fine

Torn within me

This feeling can’t be mine

Just let me grasp that special feeling
I know that best have tried
id fill you’re every breath with me then
Find a place we both can hide

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freeze us both in time@
Junior Member
since 2009-06-14
Posts 16

1 posted 2009-06-15 06:26 AM


NOTE:

chase that high the ghost in the snow who is so hard to find is likely not to even exist

this particular post is specifically based on addiction

peaceNlove guys

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2009-06-15 07:33 AM


quote:
Just let me grasp that special feeling
and guarantee a spring divine
rid you off possessions fleeting
Remaining clarity so fine.

Why so broken?

Summer seemed so fine

Torn within me

This feeling can’t be mine

Just let me grasp that special feeling
I know that best have tried
i'd fill your every breath with me then
Find a place we both can hide



Beautifully rendered, dear "freeze", and very very poignant.

Thank you for sharing.

Love,
Margherita

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2009-06-15 08:51 PM


An interesting perspective.
Welcome to Passions, where you won't freeze....

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

4 posted 2009-06-16 08:38 AM


well done...enjoyed the imagry...

Lee J.

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