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freeze us both in time@
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0 posted 2009-06-15 06:06 AM



Chasing ghosts in the snow

Run from it within

I miss your caring eyes

Though I know not where you’ve been

shed your mask in the gloom

Though I can not see at all

Run from it within

prepare that final fall

Shattered thoughts collide

The deepest ruin wins

Chasing ghosts in the snow

And run from it within

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Margherita
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1 posted 2009-06-15 07:28 AM


You have evoked the Swiss flag colors with this one ... cherry red and snow white. Of course this has nothing to do with the poem itself, but whenever I see the combination of these two colors, my homecountry seems to say hi! So thank you!

I think this is a very poignant write, dear "freeze". It makes me think of an inner turmoil that longs to be soothed.

Powerful.

Love,
Margherita


freeze us both in time@
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2 posted 2009-06-15 08:56 AM


last two poems are based on drug addiction


cherry red/I had that feeling


I actually suprised myself as generally there is no specific content or aim of expression within my writing

loving all the support from you guys =]


and the poetry is incredibly inspiring


thank you all


peaceNlove

freeze us both in time@
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since 2009-06-14
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3 posted 2009-06-15 12:21 PM


lovely Margherita

it feels so good to hear my writing has been interpreted so sincerely and holds a significance on a personal level


may it be the swiss flag =]


and may the turmoil be appeased

peaceNlove

~freeze~

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