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Suncleaver
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since 2009-01-18
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Stafford England

0 posted 2009-06-14 10:38 PM


You whispered passion's words, now I entreat,
With lust, to open lips of promise sired
Within your eyes, as burning gazes meet,
Together now, this moment long desired,
Entwined in deepest love and thirst for life,
Our Eden burns and flames to heaven rise,
Come and take what is yours, forget all strife,
And see forbidden fruit within my eyes,
The tongues of angels have no word for sin,
For passion is divine; this love of ours,
The loves of men and gods; they are akin,
Come drink, the wine of Eros never sours,
Enfold me deep, my naked Eve of lore,
For ever love foreshadowed dawn of war.


With eternal love, for A Romantic Heart.

I love her as the first man did love his Eve.



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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2009-06-15 01:27 AM


To be loved so deeply is all one could ever hope or ask for....I thank you for your love!

When asked by a woman, how much more so could a woman be admired, loved,
and the answer rests within the words of a poem, the highest of love, compliments,
for your gift of the written word, the beauty of your heart, the pieces of your soul, I am forever indebted ....

I embrace them , file them, and tuck them away, inside my hearts treasure box....

where eternally your love rests....forevermore!

unto you, I owe my heart....
Forever grateful for your gift(s) of love...

All my love,
LB(Eve)

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (06-16-2009 10:48 AM).]

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2009-06-16 03:27 PM


It's a joy to witness your mutual inspiration and the unfolding of this wondrous love, dear Luke and Millette.

Beautiful work!

Love,
Margherita

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