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brneyedgrly
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0 posted 2009-06-14 10:07 AM



What turned my head~

Conversation of Tolstoy
and the telling of
an Amish joke


How I fell in love~

The time-stopping
way I was kissed,
long, soft, hot, slow


Why he still owns my heart~

Simply this:
he wrote me a poem.

~ from “Songs from the Time of Kren Shaw”

~I am the keeper of what he cast off~

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Margherita
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1 posted 2009-06-14 11:38 AM


Very romantic and tender! Poems have it in them!! My husband conquered me reading poems to me ... and writing some too.

Love,
Margherita

brneyedgrly
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2 posted 2009-06-14 05:35 PM


~thanks, 'rita...his poem was the greatest gift, only because words mean so much to me and i appreciated that they were important  enough to him to write down instead of letting them die in thought.  thanks for reading : )
Oklahoma Rose
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3 posted 2009-06-15 08:35 PM


They do know the way to a girl heart, don't they?
brneyedgrly
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4 posted 2009-06-16 06:50 PM


yes, rose...poets are very hard to find, but worth every word  : )
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