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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2009-06-13 11:53 PM


trembling with the dawn

life has come and gone
like a dream within a dream;
I am the brittle tumbleweed
trembling with the dawn.


       --- b. e adams (6/13/2009)


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BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2009-06-14 12:18 PM


Excellent analogy and so very well said!
Alison
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2 posted 2009-06-14 01:40 AM


Bruce,

You write so well - and I am hanging on to each poem you share to make sure that you don't blow away and disappear.

Your friend,
Alison

Margherita
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3 posted 2009-06-14 11:27 AM


Beautiful thoughts and imagery, dear Bruce.

You do perceive the unity of all things.

Love,
Margherita

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2009-06-14 06:04 PM


This one is special, Bruce, another keeper.
                                  Ida

Robert E. Jordan
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5 posted 2009-06-14 06:16 PM


Yo Secondhanddreampoet,

This is a nice poem.  Let's hope that life hangs around for a while.

Bobby

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