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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2009-06-13 11:34 PM


    summer shower

summer evening …

warm rain on
rocks of all colors.
the scent of earth
   and flowers
on a fine-refreshing
    breeze.

...poignant memories

        --- b. e. adams (6/13/09)

© Copyright 2009 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2009-06-14 12:20 PM


You are too much!!
You capture the beauty and poignant memories with a fine tuned pen.

Alison
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2 posted 2009-06-14 01:41 AM


Beautiful.  You see nature like few do.

xoxoxo
A

Margherita
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3 posted 2009-06-14 11:30 AM


The scent of summer rain is a magical container for very special memories, no doubt.

Beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

Heart2Heart
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4 posted 2009-06-14 01:42 PM


Adored this little picture poem.
Heart2Heart

Marchmadness
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5 posted 2009-06-14 06:01 PM


A shower of beautifrul memories, Bruce.
                                Ida

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2009-06-14 06:18 PM


Yo Secondhanddreampoet,

You have hit it about right in this poem.  It's very good work.

Bobby

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Gaia
7 posted 2009-06-14 07:53 PM


in the after glow,
the amber light of night
casts its warmth
on ancient stones,
highlighting
deep time


Billie Cullimore
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8 posted 2009-06-15 01:29 AM




Very nice, Good things come in small pakages.


Billie C.

A Romantic Heart
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9 posted 2009-06-16 10:32 AM


I can see it, feel it, and smell it now, that warm rain....

fine applause

Artic Wind
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10 posted 2009-06-17 10:57 PM


Just divine poetry is all I am going to say!


ARCTIC WIND

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