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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto 
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Picking up the pieces Gathering all the tears All the past releases All that depression bears Rummage in the corners Anxious for reveal Pieces of the former Life that was so real Grasping for what reason Questions of the mind Searching near depletion Come to never find... c2009 vduna |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
sometimes it's best to let the pieces fall where they may. You wrote this with a lot of feeling. Tomorrow, it's only a day away~~ Be well~ |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Victor, It's like trying to put a jigsaw piece together when some of the pieces have parts torn off. They just don't fit any more. Good poem. Alison |
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freeze us both in time@ Junior Member
since 2009-06-14
Posts 16 |
somewhat similar to my style of poetry =] seriously touching.... keep up the good work |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Victor, this is beautifully written, your pain is still deeply felt. Remember you are able to create your "reality", but only if you focus unencumbered on the NOW. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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MinSW Member
since 2009-06-14
Posts 53Sri Lanka |
Dear Victor, This is vey very touching..I'm sure most of us feel this way, but only a few can convey that pain to the others.. Beutiful. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
there is the ache of melancholy in this, but it emotes well...nice write |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
A heartfelt and touching write indeed. Sorry for your pain. Heart2Heart |
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