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Margherita
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Soul sigh shower


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As above so below
truth embraces me.


Immersed in azure waters
I float under a silvery sky.
Raindrops fall upon my face
in quiet reviving rhythm.
My mind drifts into receptivity
and records the mesmerizing
cosmic heartbeat resounding
across me into infinity.

Soft waves like invisible hands
caress every inch of my skin.
Like tiny kisses from eternity
the raindrops gently knock
on the windows of my spirit.
As if by teletransportation
through the rising mist
I reach the land of revelation.

Centered and in harmony
with all that surrounds me,
I open my inner eyes
to far away shores of light.
Wrapped in ribbons of peace,
I have found my way back
into the ever reassuring
loving womb of Universe.

Living waters have plunged me
into the creative space
between above and below.
In awe I fluctuate
between parallel worlds
traversing me,
in my wholeness,
in my spirit and my flesh.

And I sigh and kiss
the showering skies
as if baptized anew
by a host of Angels
in the name of eternal Love,
the one power ruling all life.

As above so below
truth embraces me.




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© Copyright 2009 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 06-13-2009 07:36 PM       View Profile for Robert E. Jordan   Email Robert E. Jordan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Robert E. Jordan

Yo dear Margherita,

This is well thought-out, and written.  It's always best to be embraced by the truth, that way you don't miss anything that's real.

Love Bobby
serenity blaze
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2 posted 06-13-2009 07:41 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

I read you in awe, yanno.

I try to find this place that you pour your spirit from so securely, and think sometimes that if I must try so hard, it can't be a good thing.

You have my total admiration.

You're a beautiful woman.
Earth Angel
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3 posted 06-13-2009 07:43 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

....SAVED!!! Oh, my dear soul sister Dolphina, tears are welling in my eyes from the sheer beauty of this divine penning. It is beyond beautiful ~ My soul is sighing.

Oh, how I'd love to take a shower with you!  ~ a soul shower such as this, that is!

I do so love your poetry! ~ and spirit!

I will read ~ and experience ~ your mediative words, often.

Thank you Maga Magherita!



Angelo Terrestre

brneyedgrly
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4 posted 06-13-2009 10:18 PM       View Profile for brneyedgrly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brneyedgrly

Centered and in harmony
with all that surrounds me,
I open my inner eyes
to far away shores of light.
Wrapped in ribbons of peace,
I have found my way back
into the ever reassuring
loving womb of Universe.

~this is totally lulling....beautiful poem, Mar
BluesSerenade
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5 posted 06-14-2009 12:14 AM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

I tried to pick my favorite lines,  but they all speak to me
in a very special way. You write beautifully, Margherita~

You are indeed, centered and in harmony!!!
Alison
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6 posted 06-14-2009 01:38 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Margherita,

You bring me serenity with every poem.  You are a beautiful woman and a beautiful poet.  This is just a keeper, just like Linda said.  Thank you for you.

Love,
Alison
Heart2Heart
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7 posted 06-14-2009 03:02 AM       View Profile for Heart2Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Heart2Heart

Your beautifully written poem makes a deep impression in my mind.
Heart2Heart
OwlSA
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8 posted 06-14-2009 05:30 AM       View Profile for OwlSA   Email OwlSA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for OwlSA

This should be read aloud to everybody in the whole world, preferably at the start of every day.  Lasting world peace would be the immediate result.  

Margherita, of all your magnificent poems, this is, in my humble opinion, the very, very, very best (although it is difficult to remember them all at the same time).  I just simply don't know how you can ever write a more perfect poem.  

Owl
Margherita
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9 posted 06-15-2009 03:52 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Thank you all, my dear Poet friends, for your appreciation. Your most generous comments brought heartsmiles.

Enjoy a beautiful week, allowing your creativity to surface and to manifest, while growing in awareness of the beauty of being.

Love,
Margherita
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nice
freeze us both in time@
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11 posted 06-15-2009 05:46 AM       View Profile for freeze us both in time@   Email freeze us both in time@   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for freeze us both in time@

Dearest Margherita


I am contacting you not only about the fabulous piece above but to personally thank you for being so supportive with my poetry...i am new to this site/ writing in general and your kind remarks were much appreciated

I really enjoy your poems they are so expressive and extremely well developed...so kudos to you my friend! you bring all words to life so keep doing it!

thank you beatifulheart
peaceNlove
Margherita
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12 posted 06-15-2009 05:57 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Thank you, dear "freeze", for your most loving reply. It's good to have you aboard the Pip-ship. You write in a very beautiful, thought provoking way.
Love,
Margherita
Rick
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13 posted 06-15-2009 07:35 AM       View Profile for Rick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rick's Home Page   View IP for Rick

I so enjoyed your Soul sigh shower and now feel refreshed my friend, thankyou for the sharing.

Rick
Marchmadness
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14 posted 06-15-2009 12:26 PM       View Profile for Marchmadness   Email Marchmadness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marchmadness

I agree with Owl. This poem would be a wonderful way for everyone to start their day. Beautiful thoughts for the end of the journey as well.
                                  Ida
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15 posted 06-15-2009 01:27 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

Margherita, this is exquisite!
Your passionate love of all life emerges from each and every line, like a brilliant butterfly emerging from a cocoon. You take my breath away with such ethereal poetry.
A wonderful addition to my growing library.
Billie Cullimore
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My dear Margherta;

You are an insparation to all who have the privilege of reading your work. and I see by your picture that you have a lovely smile, and spirit comes across in your work.

love to you

Billie C.  
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17 posted 06-16-2009 01:35 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Absolutely exquisite Margherita.
Marc-Andre
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18 posted 06-16-2009 03:48 AM       View Profile for Marc-Andre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marc-Andre

Margherita, the inner music in this poem is well-executed, with its richness in assonances. A delightful read.

Mark
LeeJ
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Living waters have plunged me
into the creative space
between above and below.
In awe I fluctuate
between parallel worlds
traversing me,
in my wholeness,
in my spirit and my flesh.


such beautiful writing my friend...lovely and well done....
good to see you and read you again...

steavenr
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20 posted 06-16-2009 03:24 PM       View Profile for steavenr   Email steavenr   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit steavenr's Home Page   View IP for steavenr

this is almost like a dissertation you would read because you were looking to quote an expert on the subject at hand...love how you open & close it...lends further credence to the truths that lie within...this is a rare gem...thank you for sharing...
Margherita
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21 posted 06-16-2009 03:30 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Thank you, my dear Poet friends, you really brought joy with your wonderful replies.

A big hug for each of you, with love.

Margherita
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22 posted 06-16-2009 03:50 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms mar, lovely whet images in this slice of swallowing..
Bill Charles
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23 posted 06-16-2009 05:18 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Margherita - what can I say that hasn't been said, great write...

BC
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24 posted 06-16-2009 06:04 PM       View Profile for WTBAKELAR   Email WTBAKELAR   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WTBAKELAR

Margherita
What can I say that Bill didn't say, except maybe,

This is the best poem I have read of yours and absolutely, one of the best in PIP.

Take a bow to the much deserved standing ovation.

Wonderfully done.
Tracey.
 
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