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Open Poetry #45

While You Were Away...

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

0 posted 2009-06-13 09:00 AM

Sitting here…
stilled with wandering thoughts…
A heart’s desire…
tempered by unblemished faith…

Imagination…
gently eased.
Restlessness…
softly swayed.

A little prayer…
quietly whispered…
desperately pining...
to be in your arms again,
when the stars awake.

"Le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne connait point.
The heart has its reasons of which reason knows nothing."

~ Blaise Pascal ~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2009-06-13 01:09 PM

Enjoyed, Verve.
Ida

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

2 posted 2009-06-13 04:51 PM

Thank you Ida. =)

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2009-06-13 11:46 PM

tempered by unblemished faith…

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Nice lines to live by.
Short and sweetly done.

Loving this, Verve~

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2009-06-14 01:30 AM

I enjoyed this, Verve. It's really very lovely in its simplicity.

Alison

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

5 posted 2009-06-14 06:08 AM

Thanks you both! Glad that you enjoyed it! =D

I was wondering if it was too simple... hahaha... coz i wrote it in like 10mins when i was seriously tipsy! HAHA. =P

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