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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2009-06-12 09:03 PM


Creepy people
can do everything they want
to Bones,
as long as the money’s there.  

It’s not legal,
and it’s anything but fair,
but that’s the way
our uncaring world is set up.  

Bones knows his place.

Bobby

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brneyedgrly
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1 posted 2009-06-12 09:47 PM


~yo bobby...i think me and bones would understand each other real well...tell him about me, will ya?
Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2009-06-12 09:52 PM


Thanks dear Brneyedgrly,

Yes, I'm sure that you and Bones would hit it off real good.  He's already heard about you.

Love Bobby/Bones

brneyedgrly
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3 posted 2009-06-12 10:19 PM


~yo bobby...bones might want to check out brneyedgrly's post in the insights category...i have a feeling he will understand
Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2009-06-13 10:09 AM


Thanks dear Brneyedgrly,

Yes, Bones understands so many things about our "human condition".  Bones has been around.

Love Bobby

Marc-Andre
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5 posted 2009-06-13 11:37 AM


Well-written, Bobby. I'd drop the last two lines, but that's probably just me.

Mark

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2009-06-13 11:43 AM


Thanks Mark,

I'm glad that you found it well written.

Bobby

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2009-06-13 12:26 PM


Bobby - there are many creepy people out there, however, perhaps Bones needs to not associate with them...

BC

Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2009-06-13 12:34 PM


Thanks Bill,

Be assured that Bones knows your feelings on the matter.

What Bones needs is a nice adoptive home where someone will see that he's fed, clothed, and well treated.

Bobby

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