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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2009-06-12 04:49 PM


Griselda keeps ragging on Bones,
“Why are you so angry?”  

Bones,
he doesn’t notice such things,
he’s not at all sure
what Griselda is talking about.  

To Bones,
Bones is just Bones,
and always has been.  

There’s no change
that he can see.  

It’s all a complete mystery
to Bones.

Bobby

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brneyedgrly
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1 posted 2009-06-12 06:34 PM


~bones may or may not be angry, but he has hella spirit!


Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2009-06-12 07:34 PM


Thanks dear Brneyedgrly,

For the kind words on Bones.  Bones does get angry sometimes, a lot less since Griselda's around though.

Love Bobby

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2009-06-12 11:15 PM


Tell Griselda that it's okay.

Anger is an honest voice of pain. ?

Sometimes all it takes is some help--a little bit of mood awareness, coping skills, and behavior modification can work wonders.

But--smile--I'm talking like I know.




I love this series too.

poddarku
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4 posted 2009-06-13 02:12 AM


In my bones I can feel being the Bones. Great writing.

clever talks delay friendship!

Robert E. Jordan
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5 posted 2009-06-13 10:14 AM


Thanks dear Serenity blaze,

Bones has tried those things.  They didn't seem to help too much.

However, Bones has learned to put his anger to good use.  Such a thing is possible.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2009-06-13 10:16 AM


Thanks Poddarku,

For your understanding of Bones and his anger.

Bobby

Marc-Andre
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7 posted 2009-06-13 11:24 AM


Bobby, I find this well-written, and quite sad...when self-awareness goes, so does hope.

Mark

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8 posted 2009-06-13 11:33 AM


enjoyed
Robert E. Jordan
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9 posted 2009-06-13 11:51 AM


Thanks Mark,

I'm glad you found it well written.

Bones isn't the type to beat himself up.  Too many other people do that for him.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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10 posted 2009-06-13 11:59 AM


Thanks dear Vandana,

I'm happy that you enjoyed the poem.

Love Bobby

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11 posted 2009-06-14 12:13 PM


Gee, I wonder what Bones would have to be angry about.  I would be more worried if he were not angry sometimes.

A

Robert E. Jordan
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12 posted 2009-06-14 10:29 PM


Thanks dear Alison,

Well you know how it is.  Bones is the moody sort.  Bones is always thinking, and when he thinks, he sometimes get very angry.

Thinking is a nasty habit Bones has.

Love bobby

Billie Cullimore
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13 posted 2009-06-16 01:47 AM



Dear Bones;  I just have to answer this. I'm told I have a quick temper.  I quess I do, but I never understand why any one should stay angry with me.  I'm over it as fast as it came. But I do know that when you keep things bottled up inside of you they fester like a cancer. So get angry, blow off steam.  But be happy.


love un' stuff

Billie C.

Robert E. Jordan
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14 posted 2009-06-16 01:49 PM


Thanks dear Billie,

Bones is happy.  

Love Bones

LindsayP
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15 posted 2009-06-16 10:09 PM



I'm glad to see Bones is happy again

Bobby, being angry doesn't do anyone any good.

Lindsay

Robert E. Jordan
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16 posted 2009-06-16 10:17 PM


Thanks Lindsay,

You are correct.  As Bones would say, there's no money in being angry.

Bones tends to be moody, it's just the way he's made I suppose.  He always remembers though, there's no money in it.

I agree with Bones, but then I would, wouldn't I?

Bobby

Bill Charles
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17 posted 2009-06-16 10:18 PM


Bobby - Bones can't be angry for he has Griselda, and she's a cutie. I know, as I've met her when I was in philly. Tell Bones for me that he's got one heck of a woman...

BC

Robert E. Jordan
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18 posted 2009-06-17 09:48 AM


Thanks Bill,

You are absolutely right.  Griselda is really something.

That's one thing that's really great about Philly.  It's loaded down with beautiful women.

Bobby

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