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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2009-06-12 08:58 AM



Moving softly
as do the strains of a Stradivarius
playing some midnight symphony of
orchestrated strings
reverberating through
my very core,


   each chord plays my senses
   the notes,


   echoing


into the depths
of a sacred desire
that trembles me


until comes the rise
and fall


of crescendos

as we are lulled
into a tender hush
of two souls entwined
within this rhapsody


of love.

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1 posted 2009-06-12 11:23 AM


Such beautiful music you have composed, Donna.  I can hear all the way up here.  This is a really good poem - thank you for sharing it.


xoxoxox
A

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2009-06-12 11:41 AM


Gentle Spirit - lovely, just lovely...

BC

BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2009-06-12 08:52 PM


A waltz of words, this is~

Have to love the crescendo~  

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2009-06-13 01:06 PM


Ali,  you are always far to kind to me, but I love you for it gal!  Thanks so much hon.  Hugs n peace ~D
Margherita
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5 posted 2009-06-13 06:09 PM


Dear Donna, so good to read you again and with such a captivating happy theme!

Beautifully done!

Love,
Margherita

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2009-06-15 04:31 PM


Bill, Bluesy, Margherita, thank you all for slipping in on this one.  I'm so pleased that you enjoyed.  
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