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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2009-10-31 01:42 PM


howard :

                                  those cool and creamy treats always hit the spot

eve :

                                  i know

cashier :

                                  hello can i take your order?

howard :

                                  i'll take an Oreo Sonic Blast

eve :

                                  and i'll take a Reese’s peanut butter Sonic Blast



                                  boom!!!!!!!!!!



                                  there goes another blast

                                  my team just scored again

                                  go Vols!!!!!!!

                                  you know what

                                  i think i’ll take a Butterfinger Sonic Blast too

cashier :

                                  thanks guys

                                  i'll be right back

                                                        [inside]

sonic worker :

                                  she’s having a blast tonight

cashier :

                                                         i know




                                                                                  love,

                                                                                 eve & howard



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Osprey
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since 2009-04-12
Posts 249

1 posted 2009-10-31 04:44 PM


Well, I never had the slightest idea what an Oreo Sonic Blast was, but man....I know now(just Googled it). Hey, could I devour one so easily?  You bet.
Thank you, Eve and Howard

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2009-10-31 04:58 PM


I too had to check things to fully appreciate your tale, dear Howard. Loved it! Some friendly blasts!

Love,
Margherita

howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
Posts 678

3 posted 2009-11-04 03:25 PM


thanks osprey and marherita
Bob K
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since 2007-11-03
Posts 4208

4 posted 2009-11-05 03:11 AM




Dear howardtsu,

               I am very fond of this.

                                                          And how are you?

The Oreos must be very crunchy,

                                                       the ice cream a firm delight

It would be a pleasure to devour one,

                                                        at any hour, day or night.

Thank you, thank you,

                                     do be careful with the plastic spoons

during the waning

                                    and the wild-eyed Gibbous moons.

Sincerely,  Bob Kaven



SlowlyFallAway
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since 2008-08-29
Posts 279
North Carolina
5 posted 2009-11-05 09:47 AM


sweet write. literally?
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