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Open Poetry #45

Hunger No More, Come, Be Satisfied

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2009-06-11 02:06 AM

Lover come quickly,
unveil this heart,
peel away my skin,
with your razor eyes,

Devour my juicy heart,
ripened to sweetness,
flavorful, mouth full,
come, be satisfied,

Taste the forbidden,
exotic, unusual, unique,
my chocolate brain,
will be your dessert,

When your thoughts are full,
the heart is satisfied,
I will be your feast,
eat my soul alive!

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

1 posted 2009-06-14 09:56 PM

How tempting.

But any mortal feast would be ash compared to the taste of your love.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2009-06-16 10:34 AM

"When your thoughts are full,
the heart is satisfied,"

...I love the special dimension this gave to your write (btw, lovely & compelling words)

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

3 posted 2009-06-16 10:58 AM

Dang yo.

You really like this guy, huh? I wouldn't offer a chica my soul to devour. Or my heart or chocolate brain.

Clever write, enjoyed it vurray mucho.

-P

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2009-06-17 07:07 PM

Wonderful...James

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