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I Do Everything Out of Order, Ellen.

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viking_metal
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0 posted 06-10-2009 05:09 PM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for viking_metal


In my haste
to count my way
to your sweet, mother-earth voice
to surf amongst
the delicate waves of your hair...

I forgot to ask for your name.

You told me so effortlessly,
"It's Ellen."
As if you thought it wasn't
the most wonderful thing
that I'd ever heard.
________________________________
-P

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

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with you


1 posted 06-10-2009 06:54 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

awww this is awesome
viking_metal
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2 posted 06-11-2009 01:08 AM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

Aw thanks SEA.

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

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3 posted 06-11-2009 01:29 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Yep, you are on a roll with the poems.  I am loving this one.  It's like peeking into a guy's mind - well, doh, huh.  Sheese, that was profound!!!  

Anyway, burp all over my comment if you wish - but I still like the poem.

Ala'shroom
viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.


4 posted 06-11-2009 01:31 AM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

Thanks Alahoon.

-P

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

Hatmadda
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since 06-11-2009
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Colorado


5 posted 06-11-2009 03:28 AM       View Profile for Hatmadda   Email Hatmadda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Hatmadda

Been there mate!
Good depiction I might add.
Enjoyed.
viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.


6 posted 06-11-2009 10:24 AM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

Thanks hatman.

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

Nancy Hardin
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7 posted 01-19-2010 01:15 PM       View Profile for Nancy Hardin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nancy Hardin's Home Page   View IP for Nancy Hardin

Such a romantic you are! But it's great reading such a "baring of the soul," especially coming from a guy. (Is that sexist?) I read several of your works, and liked 'em all!

 
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