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Heart2Heart
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0 posted 2009-06-10 04:28 PM





Moonlight rendezvous

The moon in starry zenith
Her silver wings spanned wide
Gazed down upon the meeting
'Tween loch and countryside
Her dazzling, magic powers
Like dreams reflecting through
Enchantingly beguiling
A tranquil rendezvous

She smiled upon the waters
That shimmered brilliantly
Blowing gentle, soothing breezes
To a spellbound, dreamy sea
An ocean softly whispering
The lyrics of its tide
As though it sang to angels
Of beauty sanctified......



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2009-06-10 04:37 PM


Yes, yes yes....

When photo meets words and
both magnify one another,
this is beauty personified.

Lovely read...

thank you!


Chalmette Guy
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2 posted 2009-06-10 04:38 PM


Great lyical rhythm in your words.

At first I was like, who says loch? Then I saw you are in Scotland. lol

Heart2Heart
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3 posted 2009-06-10 05:22 PM


You make my evening with such words of delight, thank you so much Sunshine :-)
Heart2Heart

Heart2Heart
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4 posted 2009-06-10 05:23 PM


Yes, indeed, I am Scottish, and I never tire of writing about my beautiful (and friendly) homeland.  Thanks Chalmette !
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steavenr
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5 posted 2009-06-10 06:10 PM


...beautiful words, lovely cadence, vivid metaphors all tend to make this 'luscious' (and the pic is nice, too)

as to your comments...lol (loch out loud)

A Romantic Heart
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6 posted 2009-06-11 12:16 PM


Oh My Heart to Heart, you
really have me singing,
this one is a keeper!

~ARH

Heart2Heart
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7 posted 2009-06-11 01:37 AM


LOL (loching out loud) now that's a good one, hehe,  thanks steavenr.
Heart2Heart:-)


Heart2Heart
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8 posted 2009-06-11 01:38 AM


And thank you dear lady for your sweet reply ARH.
H2H

Johan
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9 posted 2009-06-12 09:03 AM


A beautiful picture and poetry that fits it, great writing Katriona.

Johan

Bill Charles
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10 posted 2009-06-12 11:42 AM


Heart2Heart - beautiful picture and poem to go with it...

BC

BluesSerenade
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11 posted 2009-06-12 09:09 PM


This is so my kind of poetry.
What a beauty!!

Enjoyed, very very much!!!!

Marchmadness
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12 posted 2009-06-13 12:20 PM


Simply beautiful, Heart2heart.
                           Ida

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13 posted 2009-06-13 12:23 PM


Absolutely a glorious marriage of words and graphics - loved it!  Did you take that picture, and if not, could you point me in the direction of more of this photography?  Thanks so much.

playing.with.crayons
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14 posted 2009-06-13 12:33 PM


what a beautiful, effortlessly flowing poem.
Just amazing.


Heart2Heart
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15 posted 2009-06-13 12:50 PM


Johan, you know I appreciate a nice comment coming from a fine poet like you.
Heart2Heart

Heart2Heart
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16 posted 2009-06-13 12:50 PM


Much obliged for your sweet and kind reply Bill !
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Heart2Heart
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17 posted 2009-06-13 12:52 PM


Anthing to makes you happy makes me happy Blues !  Thanks for stopping by !
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Heart2Heart
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18 posted 2009-06-13 12:52 PM


.. and a simply gorgeous reply, thank you Marchmadness !
Heart2Heart

Heart2Heart
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19 posted 2009-06-13 12:55 PM


Mysteria, thank you !  My pictures are usually found in that wonderful site flickr.com.  This one was not taken by myself though, but my daughter is in their with her exquisite photography:-)
Heart2Heart

Margherita
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20 posted 2009-06-13 06:15 PM


quote:
An ocean softly whispering
The lyrics of its tide
As though it sang to angels
Of beauty sanctified......




You created a deeply inspiring atmosphere here!

Wonderful presentation.

Love,
Margherita

Heart2Heart
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21 posted 2009-06-14 03:08 AM


Thank you Margherita for your lovely praise.
Heart2Heart

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