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kanan south to one |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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violin highway strummed by round moon bow as if her curves are the draw of a breath then holding longer before a distant flickering of candles in windows of lovers or eyes of the coyotes of metal that eat glass like grass from meadows obsolesce oblivion obsidian asphalt without seams or just the threshold of tomorrow holding sound on her brim lip smile wanting to swallow without knowing the touch of teeth from a vanilla sunrise between mountains as dawn plays her splay as a final ace that only a one of a kind can ever win ______________ daark (owgish) kanan road down to pch.. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
just the threshold of tomorrow holding sound on her brim lip smile wanting to swallow without knowing the touch of teeth from a vanilla sunrise between mountains as dawn plays her splay as a final ace How can I not be an addict? *S* I read your words and these cubicle walls fade away... there is no boss, no deadlines... they are lost to wonder(ment). |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern....it is a pleasure to kick your walls down (grin) thanks babe |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"obsidian asphalt without seams" ...still pondering...still... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
steavenr, thanks guy...just the road with all of that sea spit shimmer.. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
dear sir, I am convinced that there is never a 'just' in your writings...  bowing b4 your coolness... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
humble thanks guy!! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This poem whispers beauty in my ears. A |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
One of a kind? You set yourself up for that one. No one writes like you do, DS~ This is gorgeous, just rough enough around the edges. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks babe _______________ ms bluezy, thanks babe for the smile |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Another gem, every stanza a sparkling facet! How you can take in all these impressions when speed is surely high is amazing. It must be the sense of freedom that brings you this magical inspiration? Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks babe |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh my, this was gorgeous! your poetry is like word art, stroking the soul amazingly beautiful...good to see you and read you D. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Here it is raining, and I find myself on Kanan Dune Rd, heading to the beach to sit the sunset. DS, the images you conjure up highlight my memories of that winding piece of asphalt, driving topless (the old MG TD) on the way to bury my toes in the sand. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms lee-j, thanks lady friend..nice to see you still wearing that hand on your shoulder... _______________ ms midnite..it is a sunspeckled afternoon here..pushing the upper end of 70, the breeze is saltyspit coated even up at the TO end of the road...quite a few bikes out and a few little flirty sports cars with their rags down letting the nearly nudes smiles of the drivers ooze down the asphault.. |
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