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Bloodline
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since 2009-05-23
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Oklahoma

0 posted 2009-06-09 08:00 PM




Some will think of a blue moon to bring sighs
Others may long for the Lover's moon day
Ocean tides flow to and fro as moonrise
Beckons the compass of my soul survey,
Pinpoint, it's heartstring arrow deep inline
Where your soft breast rhythmicly drums sweet verse
And kiss you into a breathless mood rhyme
Beyond the boundries mere words will converse
To loose the body of all weight of self
And breathe release from false fabric till bare
We tiptoe into salient waters, elf
Together a mischievous Voltaire.
My Dear why not act upon a romance whim?
Lets treat ourselves to a moonlight swim!

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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2009-06-09 08:08 PM


Oh I just loved this,
I love anything that involves the moon,
I must be part werewolf...or a female wolverine...lol...

Your poem was very beautiful and touching,
I love to read you!

What words can I say that could paint the beauty of your work?

**Where your soft breast rhythmicly drums sweet verse
And kiss you into a breathless mood rhyme
Beyond the boundries mere words will converse
To loose the body of all weight of self~loved these lines especially!!!!!!!
...now you have me in a moon mood...
~ARH

Bloodline
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since 2009-05-23
Posts 236
Oklahoma
2 posted 2009-06-09 08:22 PM


Well tis a good time for
a moon mood, saw near full
moon this morning in the
hazey fog of first light,
was alight in glow with
peeping dawn, lovely indeed,

many thanks Romantic Heart,

Bloodline

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2009-06-10 12:13 PM


Love the romance, both your poem and the picture put me in the mood.
steavenr
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4 posted 2009-06-10 01:17 AM


you've chosen a very cool pic for this write..."kiss you into a breathless mood rhyme"...and, that is such a romantically lovely line...nice write
Heart2Heart
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since 2009-05-15
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Scotland/Norway
5 posted 2009-06-10 06:00 AM


Oh yes I long for all of this, beguiling words Bloodline, was with you the whole way
:-)  And the picture is gorgeous of course !
Heart2Heart

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6 posted 2009-06-10 09:21 AM


Beautiful weave of poem and picture... pure delight! *S*
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