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tommy738
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since 2009-10-28
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0 posted 2009-10-30 10:31 PM


Its an empty feeling
Am I with out hope
Why does it have me realing
How am I to cope

This pain seems unreal
But its of my own cause
Someone please stop what I feel
Can someone please press pause

It hurts beyond belief
It cause this man to cry
When will there be some relief
How am I to get by

Love can cure this hurt
Love can fix my life
But have I burnt
THe love out from my wife

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Guybrush Threepwood
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since 2009-10-29
Posts 9

1 posted 2009-10-31 12:03 PM


I really don't think there are words appropriate for response to something like this. If it comes from your heart, if it speaks to your life, all I can really say is "have hope" and "take action".
tommy738
Junior Member
since 2009-10-28
Posts 33

2 posted 2009-10-31 12:49 PM


Thank you there are no words that can heal this pain I am in. but putting them on paper seems to help me understand my self a little better every day
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