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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2009-06-08 06:23 PM





Come, then
dreams of yesterday
where scenes seen unfold
like a mystery
yet unsolved,

unresolved moments of time
that flit on wings passing by
as wishes on wind, spin
caught up in a whirlwind
of magical nights
and mystical days

passing by in a haze
of slow motioned

emotions filling;

this cobalt night
stilling, heartbeats
blending as one
until then, come

thread loosely
these tender dreams
as I suffer willingly

this haunting
that wraps itself
inside of me

lingering, these
whisperings
of what was then
shall someday be,

once again.


© dmsmith

{Upon reading Mari's Book "The Fairytale Journals"}


© Copyright 2009 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved
Bloodline
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1 posted 2009-06-08 08:29 PM


A sweet enchantment
captured in color
and song,

Bloodline

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2009-06-08 09:10 PM


Bloodline, thanks so much for taking the time and peeking in on this one.  ~D
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Gaia
3 posted 2009-06-08 09:12 PM


YES! This is gorgeous, Donna. You were definitely inspired.
Hmm, Mari's book....I haven't read it...boo hoo hoo, when you have a chance please send me the info how to get it, ok?

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2009-06-08 09:33 PM


Kacy, thank you hon.  It was not so much what she wrote, as how she wrote.  Either way, she is a true talent.

  I have sent you the info you requested.  Hugs sweet lady.  ~D

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5 posted 2009-06-09 12:37 PM


lingering, these
whisperings
of what was then
shall someday be,

once again.

And it is for hope of that someday that we breathe. *S* So very lovely... and it's great to see you posting, dear lady! *S*

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6 posted 2009-06-09 02:09 PM


Donna,

I have missed you so ding-dang much.  What a great surprise to see you here, among us.  Please don't be gone for so long next time.

Now for your poem - it is pure beauty.  But these three lines captured me.  I think they are going to be kept in my wallet.  I love them, feel them and live them - breathe them.

quote:
thread loosely
these tender dreams
as I suffer willingly



Thank you, dear friend.

Alison

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2009-06-09 05:28 PM


Sweet friends, thank you each for the warm welcome back, and for taking the time to stop in and peek at my offering.  I just can't help myself from coming in and visiting time and time again....

It is always nice to roam these halls of blue.     hugs n peace to poetry land ~D

BluesSerenade
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8 posted 2009-06-12 08:27 PM


thread loosely
these tender dreams

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This is gorgeous and that thought up there is exquisite!!!  

I'm happy you're home!!  hug~

brneyedgrly
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9 posted 2009-06-13 11:26 AM


thread loosely
these tender dreams
as I suffer willingly

this haunting
that wraps itself
inside of me

~love this!

Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2009-06-13 12:46 PM


((Bluesy))  You touch my heart gal...
Gentle Spirit
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11 posted 2009-06-13 12:47 PM


thank you for your reply brneyedgrly, and for your time here.


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