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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2009-06-08 01:13 PM


When I'm With You

© Copyright 2009 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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1 posted 2009-06-08 02:28 PM


A beautifully presented love letter, Bill.
brneyedgrly
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2 posted 2009-06-08 06:36 PM


This is the way it is supposed to be when you are in love!

Beautiful!

WTBAKELAR
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3 posted 2009-06-08 08:16 PM


Tooo   Cooool

Nice write.
Tracey

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4 posted 2009-06-09 12:26 PM


How very lovely! *S* Soft... and superb! *S*
Ariana
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5 posted 2009-06-10 08:43 PM


Bill

Picture perfect with romantic, flowing words that describes what a romance should be - straight from the heart.  Nicely done you passionate fellow!

Ariana

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2009-06-10 09:21 PM


Yo Bill,

This is a good poem and picture presentation.

I like that bird, both of them.

Bobby

Oklahoma Rose
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7 posted 2009-06-11 09:47 AM


Bill, this is an absolutely beautiful love poem.
Bill Charles
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8 posted 2009-06-11 01:15 PM


Midnitesun - love letters are very precious, especially when written to someone dear...

brneyedgriy - I agree with you...

wtbakelar - Cool is good...

suthern - soft as a summer rain...

Ariana - passions flow from within to this pen, as you know...

Bobby - glad you like the write, and the birds...

Oklahoma Rose - love is in the air...

BC

2islander2
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9 posted 2009-06-11 04:21 PM


Hi Bill, Beautiful, one of these bells that ring in heart...Thanks

yann

Oklahoma Rose
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10 posted 2009-06-11 11:01 PM


Send some of your air my way. LOL! There is no love in my air.
Bill Charles
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11 posted 2009-06-12 11:27 AM


2islander2 - keep those bells in the heart soft as a summer rain...

Oklahoma Rose - catch the breeze my dear, it's on the way...

BC

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