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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the sign over the door said experienced and I knew you saw it when you read it out loud and did the wicked chuckle thing with your eyes like you wanted something used to use yourself you said I was probably one of the better rides but you didn't want to take me too far felt more safe sitting on the fence I guess and watching others taking their turns I used to see you every now and then girl footing in the easy dirt outside biting your lip as if to keep from speaking but your eyes always said almost everything I had planned on letting god be my judge but you said you wanted to do that too since you didn't want to take me home that would feel better then nothing at all and besides you didn't think I would notice _______________ daark |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
You write some wicked sweet poems sir. I think I've been in this situation once or twice before. -P Everyone deserves to be loved, even you. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Much enjoyed your penning here, D. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
viking..thanks my friend ______________ ms K, thanks for the eyes lady |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 you are just so goodwith word tools and such |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms midnite..thanks lady friend |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
That's the thing about signs. You don't always read them. I mean, who hasn't gone into the wrong bathroom at a bar... we're talking unintentionally here. :-) Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Unintentional is such a forgiving word. Thanks ms indi |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
When you are intentionally unintentional, you are sooo good Mr. DarkDaddy. As always, a pure pleasure to read you. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms GS you bless me babe. Thank you. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
felt more safe sitting on the fence I guess and watching others taking their turns My wicked chuckle isn't limited to my eyes as I read this... love it! *S* |
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Grimnian New Member
since 2009-06-09
Posts 8 |
Good poem, not a big fan of prose poetry, but I liked the depth contained within your words. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern, thanks so much babe! ___________ grimn' thanks and welcome to pip. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
love the way you drew the eyes in this amazing picture...a great capture, both visually and emotionally |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thanks amigo...I appreciate you |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
quote: ... and I smiled. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks little one |
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