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XxForever.BrokenxX
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0 posted 09-15-2013 05:00 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX


Wow, it sure has been a looooong time since i posted. Regardless, it feels good to be back, even if only for a time. Please forgive the complete rawness of this poem, like I said, it's been a while.
Without you I'm here until the end,
frozen in my own tears.
Held down by the weight of my scars,
making no progress.
I need that understanding,
the comfort of knowing what it's like.
I need you to help me up.

Without you I'm helpless.
Come to me,
and together we'll put me back together.

{~~*~~}
© Copyright 2013 Emmalee Yuri - All Rights Reserved
Bluesy Socrateaser
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1 posted 01-11-2014 10:01 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Email Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Scars are indelible and just about everyone has one or two or...

Your willingness to deal with life beyond them shows a strong character. Someone will see this in you and extend a firm hand. It's my hope that hand draws you closer to happiness and fulfillment.    

...just bein' Bluesy

XxForever.BrokenxX
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2 posted 01-11-2014 10:04 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Wow, thank you for you kind words! I appreciate them.
And, of course, thank you for reading.
{~~*~~}
Bluesy Socrateaser
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3 posted 02-21-2017 06:21 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Email Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

You are quite welcome. Maybe I'll see you again in a few short years. In the meantime, I do trust happiness and fulfillment have been abundant in your life.


BTS

...just bein' Bluesy

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4 posted 06-11-2018 03:16 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Good poem. I hope you got that happy ending of being put back together again

"One good thing about music: when it hits you feel no pain"- Bob Marley

Bluesy Socrateaser
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5 posted 01-09-2019 02:43 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Email Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Yes, life is moving right along. Thought I'd drop by to see if anything's up.

Wishing you well, as always.  

...just bein' Bluesy

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