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XxForever.BrokenxX
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Neverland


0 posted 09-15-2013 05:00 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX


Wow, it sure has been a looooong time since i posted. Regardless, it feels good to be back, even if only for a time. Please forgive the complete rawness of this poem, like I said, it's been a while.
Without you I'm here until the end,
frozen in my own tears.
Held down by the weight of my scars,
making no progress.
I need that understanding,
the comfort of knowing what it's like.
I need you to help me up.

Without you I'm helpless.
Come to me,
and together we'll put me back together.

{~~*~~}
© Copyright 2013 Emmalee Yuri - All Rights Reserved
Bluesy Socrateaser
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1 posted 01-11-2014 10:01 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Scars are indelible and just about everyone has one or two or...

Your willingness to deal with life beyond them shows a strong character. Someone will see this in you and extend a firm hand. It's my hope that hand draws you closer to happiness and fulfillment.    

...just bein' Bluesy

XxForever.BrokenxX
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2 posted 01-11-2014 10:04 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Wow, thank you for you kind words! I appreciate them.
And, of course, thank you for reading.
{~~*~~}
Bluesy Socrateaser
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3 posted 02-21-2017 06:21 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

You are quite welcome. Maybe I'll see you again in a few short years. In the meantime, I do trust happiness and fulfillment have been abundant in your life.


BTS

...just bein' Bluesy

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