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Lost Love

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SleepBug11
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0 posted 03-18-2013 03:07 PM       View Profile for SleepBug11   Email SleepBug11   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SleepBug11


I watched you walk away
a tear creeping down my cheek
Look for you, I must, I may
For it is you i must seek

Then you died, a knife in your heart
My life means no more
It seeks you in the dark
It is gone, you are gone

I am lost in the death of our love
Now I am bathed in darkness
Now I mean nothing
Because you were somthing

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HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 08-17-2001
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LI, New York


1 posted 04-30-2013 01:26 AM       View Profile for HopelessRomanticGuy   Email HopelessRomanticGuy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HopelessRomanticGuy

Welcome to the club!  Glad to see it's not -quite- dead here yet.  Hopefully we can bring it back to life!  I had a lot of fun here...  Anyway, back to the poetry.  

This is a very powerful piece!  I'm sorry that you have to go through this (if it's more then allegorical).  Just know that whatever happens in your life, no matter what you lose, your life still has meaning.  If anything it's our pain, as well as our joy, which define us.
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