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madelyn
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since 2009-09-03
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Purgatory

0 posted 2012-10-23 08:17 PM



It was like the entire universe was in her head
no.
the universe is too pretty

It was like there were leeches in her head
no.
leeches are far too silent

It was like there were flies in her head
no.
flies are too harmless

It was like there were bees in her head
no.
bees only have one sting so that isn't right

It was like wasps had built a nest in her head
outsiders
stinging her
from the inside
injecting their poison
from the inside
killing her
from the inside
from the inside of her head

My pen is the barrel of a gun. Remind me which side you should be on.

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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
1 posted 2012-11-10 07:03 PM


Hi there, Madelyn.

I liked the poem you posted!

Looks like there's some "not so good" things going on in your world right now.

Hopefully you know that things WILL get better!

Keep up the great postings!

"One good thing about music: when it hits you feel no pain"- Bob Marley
~I am Trance~

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