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LittleBird
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0 posted 07-31-2012 09:49 AM       View Profile for LittleBird   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LittleBird

It's me, RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed. Couldn't get back into that particular username, so here I am, starting over.

-Kate

Dark Dreamer

In the dark night I dream
An endless expanse of my past
Haunting, ghostly, you follow me
I find myself around you always

Donít you know Iím taken up?
I can never be with you
Leave me apparition, please
Let peace restore my mind

I wake with images in my head
That would shame my true resolve
Oh past, unhook me from your wily line
That I may not be devoured

I see you fishing in the black expanse
Sitting heavily upon the stars
Waiting for my dreams to past
You snatch them, one by one

I thought that we were through with this
The silly games of youth
So leave me, let me go oh dreamer
This is not our story's end
© Copyright 2012 Kate - All Rights Reserved
BlueEye
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1 posted 02-18-2013 12:41 PM       View Profile for BlueEye   Email BlueEye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BlueEye

THAT WAS AMASING!! it was really really good
SleepBug11
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2 posted 03-18-2013 02:57 PM       View Profile for SleepBug11   Email SleepBug11   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SleepBug11

Really pretty. If only songs didn't have to rhyme it would be a hit.
HopelessRomanticGuy
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3 posted 04-30-2013 01:32 AM       View Profile for HopelessRomanticGuy   Email HopelessRomanticGuy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HopelessRomanticGuy

Welcome [back] to pip, LittleBird!  Glad to see some new life here!

This was a very expressive poem.  The past most certainly be hard to let go of, especially when transitioning beyond youth.  Just remember that while your past defines who you were, YOU define who you ARE.  Keep moving forward!

P.S. - If you want access to the old account, email Ron and he'll get you back in.
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